He gives me many hugs and kisses everyday
He sings and dances while we play
He makes me feel special in every way
I am all smiles for I have a new boy friend now
He laughs with me when I am happy
He consoles me when I am sad
He listens to all I have to say
I am all smiles for I have a new boy friend now
He loves to please me
He loves to praise me
And oh he loves to tease me
I am all smiles for I have a new boy friend now
He lets me play with his toys
He is a bundle of joy
Oh he is my cute little boy
I am all smiles for I have a new boy friend now
PS: This is my first attempt at poetry. This is about my 3 year old son.
Please suggest me if I can make it better
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Lovely post... Madhuri, trust me, I didnot doubt you even for a second when I read the heading of this poem... somehow, i had the instinct to think that this had to be clean... and then, well.. ur 3-yr old son crops up in the PS !!
ReplyDeleteGood job !! And hey, no improvement needed... You cannot better the best. Right?
Wow, thanks a lot for the encouraging words. Really appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteMadhuri
Ravi says,
ReplyDeleteYour son has brought the poet out in you.
You get an A+ for you first poem
Hi Ravi,
ReplyDeleteHmm,some how I did not see this comment before. Thank you.
I agree with you. But I was inspired to write poems by Sulekha bloggers :-)
Cheers,
Madhu